Today I have a giveaway of one of my very favorite books from this year for you courtesy of Little, Brown Books – Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor, which will officially be released tomorrow.  I got a copy of this at this year’s BEA and started reading it on the bus home because I just could not wait to read it (my review).

Laini Taylor is one of my very favorite authors, and each of her books has been better than the last. This is quite an accomplishment since the bar was already set fairly high with her first Dreamdark book, Blackbringer. Then I read Silksinger, the second Dreamdark book, and was blown away by it. Lips Touch: Three Times was even more amazing, and Daughter of Smoke and Bone as a whole is even better! I cannot recommend her books enough – the writing, the stories, the fantasy elements/mythologies, and the characters are all excellent. In particular, her writing astounds me. Laini Taylor can write like no one else – she can phrase things beautifully but poignantly and concisely. I’m thrilled more people are starting to hear her name and read her books with the release of Daughter of Smoke and Bone because she’s an author who deserves more readers.

About Daughter of Smoke and Bone:

Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor

Around the world, black handprints are appearing on doorways, scorched there by winged strangers who have crept through a slit in the sky.

In a dark and dusty shop, a devil’s supply of human teeth grown dangerously low.

And in the tangled lanes of Prague, a young art student is about to be caught up in a brutal otherwordly war.

Meet Karou. She fills her sketchbooks with monsters that may or may not be real; she’s prone to disappearing on mysterious “errands”; she speaks many languages–not all of them human; and her bright blue hair actually grows out of her head that color. Who is she? That is the question that haunts her, and she’s about to find out.

When one of the strangers–beautiful, haunted Akiva–fixes his fire-colored eyes on her in an alley in Marrakesh, the result is blood and starlight, secrets unveiled, and a star-crossed love whose roots drink deep of a violent past. But will Karou live to regret learning the truth about herself?


Giveaway Rules:
To be entered in the giveaway, send an email with the subject line “Daughter of Smoke and Bone” to kristen (AT) fantasybookcafe (dot) com. One entry per person and you must be a US resident to enter (sorry to those outside the US).  The giveaway will be open until the end of the day on Saturday, October 1.  The winner has 24 hours to respond once contacted via email, and if I don’t hear from them by then a new winner will be chosen (who will also have 24 hours to respond until someone gets back to me with a place to send the book).

Please note email addresses will only be used for the purpose of contacting the winner. Once the giveaway is over all the emails will be deleted.

Good luck!

This week brought two unsolicited review copies, both of which I’m very excited about. One of these books has actually already been reviewed here since I picked up an ARC at BEA – The Children of the Sky by Vernor Vinge, the sequel to A Fire Upon the Deep.  I haven’t read it myself yet (John read and reviewed it), but I am planning to since I really enjoyed A Fire Upon the Deep when I read it earlier this year. Now I can read the lovely finished copy and preserve the signed ARC – and the finished copy is gorgeous! It will be on sale in hardcover/ebook starting October 11.

The other book is:

All Men of Genius by Lev AC RosenAll Men of Genius by Lev AC Rosen

This is a debut novel that sounds really good to me – a steampunk adventure set in Victorian London that is inspired by Twelfth Night and The Importance of Being Earnest.  Like the former, it has a girl who dresses up like a boy, except she does so in order to get into an all-male school for the sciences. It sounds very fun and I’m excited to read it! All Men of Genius will be released in hardcover/ebook on September 27.

Inspired by Shakespeare’s Twelfth Night and Oscar Wilde’s The Importance of Being Earnest, All Men of Genius takes place in a Victorian London familiar but fantastical, where mad science makes the impossible possible. 

Violet Adams wants to attend Illyria College, a widely renowned school for the most brilliant up-and-coming scientific minds, founded by the late Duke Illyria, the greatest scientist of the Victorian Age. The school is run by his son, Ernest, who has held to his father’s policy that the small, exclusive college remain male-only. Violet sees her opportunity when her father departs for America. She disguises herself as her twin brother, Ashton, and gains entry.

But keeping the secret of her sex won’t be easy, not with her friend Jack’s constant habit of pulling pranks, and especially not when the duke’s young ward, Cecily, starts to develop feelings for Violet’s alter ego, “Ashton.” Not to mention blackmail, mysterious killer automata, the way Violet’s pulse quickens whenever Ernest speaks to her, and a deadly legacy left by Ernest’s father. She soon realizes that it’s not just keeping her secret until the end of the year she has to worry about: it’s surviving that long.

The Cloud Roads is the first book in the Books of Raksura series by Martha Wells, author of the Nebula nominated novel The Death of the Necromancer. The second volume, The Serpent Sea, is scheduled for release in January 2012. Thanks to a brief Twitter conversation with Martha Wells, I discovered that she is working a third book even though it hasn’t been purchased by the publisher yet.

When Moon was very young, his mother and siblings were killed, leaving him all alone. Since then, he’s never met anyone else like him: Moon has two forms, one with wings and one without. He’s lived among various groundling communities, but he’s never really found a place to belong. Even if he manages to be friendly with others, he still always has to hide what he truly is. If the groundlings see his winged form, they confuse him with the bloodthirsty Fell and no longer want anything to do with him.

Over the years Moon has learned the hard way how to best blend in with the other groundlings, by doing things such as always accepting food and hunting away from the others. For a time, he’s been living with the Cordans where he lives in a tent with two women, one of which he has formed a relationship with. However, one night his lover follows him and sees his other form without his knowledge. She sneaks some poison that only works on Fell into his tea. When it has an effect on him, the Cordans leave him to die.

Fortunately, Moon is rescued by Stone, a shapeshifter just like him who has been scouting for others like them. He informs Moon that he is part of a race known as the Raksura and offers him a place with his court.  Moon accepts, but he doesn’t know the dire straits the Raksura of Indigo Cloud Court are in, nor does he realize just how important he may be to them. As the Raksura are simultaneously fighting threats from both within and without, Moon undergoes a more personal battle: whether or not he can truly find a place to belong with the other Raksura.

The Cloud Roads is a book that does what a good fantasy book should do – transports one to a completely unique world but adds plenty to relate to through its characters and themes. It is a rather simple story, and the line between the good side and the evil side is drawn more clearly than I normally like. In spite of that, it really appeals to the part of me that does want to see  justice and goodness prevail. That’s largely because it does have a main character in a position the average person can easily empathize with – someone who has tried all his life to fit in and failed, someone who just wants a place to belong. Moon’s inability to find these most basic social needs made it easy to want to see him succeed.

From the very first chapter, I was on Moon’s side and wanted him to find happiness. It was so sad that he didn’t know where he came from and had to learn how to hide who he was from others to just not be shunned. Even so, he was still always different and it was so unjust that these other races were so prejudiced against that. When he lived with the Cordans, he helped them gather food for the group and never hurt anyone. Yet the moment one of them learned he was different, fear took over and they wanted him eliminated. It was just that easy – one chapter about Moon’s situation ending with him in peril and I was hooked. Soon Moon learned more about who he was and it was a novel about discovery, identity, learning to trust, and forming relationships in addition to the adventure of going up against the Fell.

Aside from the more character-focused themes, the major plot is about the Fell threat and how to counter it. The Fell are a winged race who are rightly feared by all other races – and Moon and some other Raksura are often confused for them, which is a big reason Moon has to hide his winged form.  On the way home to the Indigo Cloud Court, Stone brings Moon to another colony only to find the Fell have destroyed it. When they arrive at Stone’s home, they find the Fell have visited them as well and are suspicious of their queen for speaking with them. The Fell are very evil, and this is why the two sides seem so black and white. While they have a justifiable motivation for their behavior toward the Raksura, they are still very despicable in general and do not seem to have any good qualities. Since there will be at least one more book, I’m hoping they will gain more dimension later. If not, I still don’t think it’s a bad thing given the context of this novel and the way it makes one want to see what’s right prevail. It also helps that the Fell are not human so it may not be necessary to attribute human qualities to them, although the other characters we are introduced to do seem more dimensional than the Fell.

While many elements aren’t particularly complex – the villains, the writing, and the plot – this novel does have an intricate world comprised of many different races. It’s known as the Three Worlds for the realms of the sea, the earth, and the sky and it’s populated by a variety of intelligent species. This novel mostly delves into the Raksura as learned through Moon’s eyes for the first time, but there are hints of other things that will hopefully be talked about more later (like the relations between the Fell and the Raksura and the sky creatures I assume inhabited the mysterious floating islands). The Raksura are a rather interesting race with a very defined social structure based purely on biology – when a new Raksura is born, it’s obvious what role he or she will have based on its appearance and its shapeshifting forms. This includes everything from soldiers to queens and their male consorts. It’s not all clearly defined, though – such as the details of the queen/consort relationship, which is another significant part of this novel.

In general, I thought a lot of the simplicity worked for this novel, but there were some times I thought potential conflicts were resolved too easily. At times, suspicion could be cast on a member of the group with good reason and it was often very quickly dismissed as a non-issue. Although I didn’t want to see Moon treated with distrust, I did think it would have made sense for him to be greeted with more of it than he was as an unknown Raksura. Also, while the characters were likable and had very sympathetic qualities, I didn’t feel that any of them had a lot of depth, even Moon. He was in interesting situations with his position with the new Raksura and he had problems that were easy to relate to, but he didn’t have a lot of distinct personality.

The Cloud Roads was an engaging, absorbing novel. In a lot of cases, this kind of simplicity doesn’t work, but this is a case where it does. The rich world works to counterbalance the lack of complexity in writing, plot, and characters. Furthermore, it’s just a good story that tugs on the heartstrings. Once in a while it’s refreshing to read a book with a clear good side and a well-meaning main character to root for, and The Cloud Roads is one example of a book that both does this concept very well and adds some originality with the world-building.

My Rating: 8/10

Where I got my reading copy: I bought it.

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Today I am pleased to have a guest post by Cinda Williams Chima, author of the Seven Realms series and the Heir Chronicles. I’m especially glad to have her as a guest because I’m a new fan of hers. As mentioned in yesterday’s review of The Demon King, her first Seven Realms book, I had a great time reading it and found her story and characters very engaging. I’m quite glad I have more books in the series to look forward to!

The Demon King by Cinda Williams Chima The Exiled Queen by Cinda Williams Chima The Gray Wolf Throne by Cinda Williams Chima

And now, I turn this post over to Cinda Williams Chima!

THIEVES AS HEROES

One of the viewpoint characters in my Seven Realms series is 16-year-old Han “Cuffs” Alister, streetlord of the Raggers—a gang of thieves and divers (pickpockets) in the Ragmarket and Southbridge slums of the mountain city of Fellsmarch. Han takes his street name from the silver cuffs around his wrists. He’s worn them as long as he can remember—they don’t come off.  So the astute reader knows from the start that there’s something magical going on.

Though Han is a successful thief, widely feared and respected, he’s smart enough to know that streetlords don’t live to see twenty. As The Demon King opens, he has decided to go straight. But he finds out that isn’t easy.

Han Alister

I have an affinity for thieves—the literary kind. Bandits, tricksters, pirates and hucksters abound in fiction—as they do in real life, I guess. What’s interesting is that they are so often the heroes in stories and songs.

The first Robin Hood ballads and tales were recorded in 14th century England. France birthed the famous poet-thief Francois Villon in the 15th century. Captain James Hind, a 17th century British thief, was styled as the “royalist highwayman” in popular pamphlets of the day. Supposedly, he targeted Parliamentarians, while leaving the poor alone.

Neither did I ever wrong any poor man of the worth of a penny: but I must confess, I have (when I have been necessitated thereto) made bold with a rich Bompkin, or a lying Lawyer, whose full-fed fees from the rich Farmer, doth too too much impoverish the poor cottage-keeper…

After the Restoration, French-born highwayman Claude Duval worked the roads in and out of London. He was born into a royal family whose lands and titles were confiscated. Polite and well-spoken, fashionably-dressed, he was quite the ladies’ man. One tale has it that he returned a victim’s purse when his wife agreed to dance with him along the wayside. His memorial inscription reads:

Here lies DuVall: Reder, if male thou art,
Look to thy purse; if female, to thy heart.
Much havoc has he made of both; for all
Men he made to stand, and women he made to fall.[1]

William Powell Frith Claude Duval

The Child ballad, “Henry Martin,” is based on the life of Andrew Barton, a privateer. The fact that he had a letter of marque from the Scottish crown didn’t save him when he was captured by the British. He was beheaded for a pirate.

Victorian novelist William Harrison Ainsworth romanticized 18th Century highwayman, Dick Turpin, who frequented York in Britain and was hanged at Tyburn for a horse thief.

Dick Turpin Jumping Hornsey Tollgate

The traditional Irish ballad, “The Newry Highwayman” is a typical in its treatment of thieves:

I’ve never robbed any poor man yet
Nor any tradesman caused I to fret
But I robbed Lords and their Ladies fine
And I carried their gold home to my heart’s delight

Outlaws of the American west are often portrayed as romantic figures—as in Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid, Jesse James, and Billy the Kid. During the last century, many Americans seemed to be rooting for bank robbers like John Dillinger, Bonny and Clyde, and Pretty Boy Floyd.

Most of these real-life thieves look better from a distance. In real life, thieves often steal from those who can least afford it, because they have ready access to the poor.

So what are some common tropes of literary thieves and their stories?

  1. The ruler/government/nobility/police are corrupt, brutal, dishonest themselves. Many thieves of legend turn to thievery when they’ve been pushed beyond their limits by despicable officialdom
  2. They have noble blood. All evidence says that the historical Robin Hood (if there was one) was likely a yeoman. And yet, legend gives him a royal heritage and a role in supporting the rightful king (Richard.)
  3. They steal from the rich and undeserving.
  4. They give to the poor (possibly including themselves.)
  5. They are well-dressed, courteous, and well-spoken.
  6. They follow a code of honor of sorts.
  7. They are handsome (men) or beautiful (women)
  8. They are smart, strategic, bold, charismatic—and very good at what they do
  9. They often dance on the legal borderline—and they often have powerful friends in need of their skills

Why do we love thieves? Thieves appeal to the rogue in all of us, because they live by their wits, often making fools of their more powerful adversaries. Through thieves, we can vicariously stick it to “the man.”

Thieves can get into forbidden places, ferret out secrets, and take risks that we wouldn’t take ourselves. Perhaps we all have a streak of larceny in us. We’re all rule-breakers at heart.

The Seven Realms series is a transformation story—Han Alister the wizard thief is transformed into someone who can interact with and outwit bluebloods. It turns out that the skills he learned on the mean streets of Ragmarket serve him well as he navigates the treacherous Gray Wolf Court.

In this excerpt from The Gray Wolf Throne former streetlord Han Alister is giving an assignment to Cat Tyburn, who used to run the streets with him.

 
“Are you just trying to get rid of me?”

Han shook his head. “I wouldn’t send you if it wasn’t for a reason. I want you to go back to Ragmarket, and get set up there again, like you said. See if the heat’s died down. It should have—the Bayars have other things to think about and last they knew I was in Oden’s Ford.”

“What do you mean, get set up?” Cat asked.

“I know you said everybody’s dead, but see if somebody didn’t get overlooked, if you can get a crew together again.”

Cat stared at him. “You want us out diving pockets and charming locks?”

“Maybe. Eventually. Certain pockets and certain locks. But I need rum divers and dubbers, coves that can amuse the law. More important, I want quality, people we can trust.” He jerked his chin toward his pile of belongings. “Take my purse and give whacks out of that. I expect we’ll be in the city inside of a week. Leave word under the clock at the market, and I’ll do the same.”

Cat sorted through his things and held up his purse. “You sure you want me to take all of this?”

Han nodded. “The clans’ll be good for more.”

“You want me to say who’s streetlord?”

Han thought a moment. “Tell them my street name’s the Demon King. Say I’ve got uptown connections but nasty enemies. Tell them not to come in if they’re quivery.”

About the Author:
Cinda Williams Chima has authored two best-selling fantasy series: The Heir Chronicles (The Warrior Heir, The Wizard Heir, The Dragon Heir) with two books forthcoming; and the Seven Realms series (The Demon King, The Exiled Queen, and the newly-released The Gray Wolf Throne) with more forthcoming. You can find information about her tour for The Gray Wolf Throne and other upcoming events here http://cindachima.com/Events/events.htm.

More information and excerpts from each book are available on her website, www.cindachima.com. Help for writers can be found under Resources/Tips for Writers, including a document called, “Getting Started in Writing for Teens.”

Chima blogs at http://cindachima.blogspot.com/, where you’ll find rants, posts on the craft of writing, and news. Visit her Seven Realms and Heir Chronicles pages on Facebook.

The Demon King is the first book in the Seven Realms series by Cinda Williams Chima.  It is followed by The Exiled Queen, and the third book The Gray Wolf Throne was just released last month. The Crimson Crown, the fourth and final book in the series, is scheduled for release in fall 2012.

Han used to be a very successful leader of a street gang known as “Cuffs” for his silver armbands, which he cannot remove and has had ever since he can remember. Now he’s trying to make a more honest living performing tasks such as collecting plants to sell and running errands for others. It’s not enough to provide for himself, his mother, and his sister – and it’s not enough to escape his past, especially when a bunch of his old rivals from when he was a streetlord are brutally murdered. The Queen’s Guard knows all about Cuffs and his reputation and are all too eager to pin the crimes on Han.

However, Han is beginning to wonder if an amulet in his possession is cursed, especially after learning it used to belong to the Demon King of legend. He acquired it when his friend from the clan, Fire Dancer, and he confronted some wizards who were trespassing on clan land. When one of them threatened them with the amulet, Han ended up taking it from him so he wouldn’t use it against them later. Fire Dancer had advised him to leave the amulet behind, but Han couldn’t bear to lose such a powerful, valuable object. Ever since that day, his luck seems to have gotten worse and worse.

Meanwhile, Raisa, the heir to the queendom, is nearing her sixteenth birthday when she will be old enough to marry. Considering her mother is still fairly young and should have many years ahead of her to rule, Raisa doesn’t plan on getting married anytime soon. Yet her mother has other plans for her and Raisa is realizing more and more that her mother is not as she remembers her – which is bad news for the queendom.

While it is largely setting up the rest of the series, The Demon King still manages to be an absorbing book with engaging characters. It did have a slow start and it wasn’t until about 30% of the way through that it fully drew me in, but once I reached that point I couldn’t put it down. There was one afternoon I had been planning to just read a couple of chapters, but I reached that point and ended up spending the whole afternoon just reading this book. It’s not a complex book or one that’s terribly original, but it doesn’t matter since it’s a well told story. Cinda Williams Chima is one of those authors who can take familiar concepts, add a bit of polish with some unique details, and then create character perspectives that give it an added shine.

The Demon King does utilize a lot of common fantasy character tropes – the commoner who is special in some way, the brave and reckless princess, and the very unsympathetic villain. In spite of that, the two main characters are both very sympathetic and compelling. I particularly loved the contrast of their two viewpoints.

Han is so poor his family worries about their next meal, and he knows  the way of the streets. Though Han, we get to see the life of the common people and the clans. It was really easy to like Han, and I related to him immediately with his plight of reforming himself but being unable to escape his reputation and trying to provide for his mother and sister. He’s charismatic and a little bit roguish but not to the point where he’s despicable – he has a reason for anything he does and he never does anything so horrible that he’s unlikable. Han was easily my favorite of the characters, and he was also the one who had a more exciting plot.

Raisa, on the other hand, is the heir to the throne, and it’s from her perspective that we see court life and the wizards. It did take me longer to warm up to Raisa than it did Han, but eventually she won me over. In spite of being royalty, it soon becomes clear that Raisa is not without problems as well. Raisa was the one who underwent the most character development as she began to learn more about the parts of the queendom she’s been isolated from all her life – and begins to discover the way the world really works for the average person.  She yearns to be free and able to make her own choices instead of being constrained by living the life required of a future queen. These wishes gave her more dimension than the somewhat typical adventurous princess she began as, especially as she made an effort to become a better, more informed person.

Han and Raisa’s stories each show a different piece of the puzzle and overlap. Although they don’t spend much time together in this book, their meeting was very memorable, and I’m hoping they’ll spend much more time together in the next book!

Unfortunately, most of the secondary characters are more one dimensional, in particular a lot of the those present at the queen’s court (other than the Captain of the Queen’s Guard and his son who were great additions to the cast of characters). This may be part of the reason I had difficulty warming up to Raisa at first – Han got the more interesting characters to interact with since the people of the clans were better characters. Since Han and Raisa both were good characters, the lack of great secondary characters was not a big deal, though.

I loved the way the history of the world was revealed and how it affected the present. Due to one wizard’s power, there are rules in place about what wizards can do – they can’t marry the queen, they can only use magical items with limited power, and they are not supposed to set foot on the land belonging to the clans. As a result, some people also are prejudiced against wizards, especially those who do not see them all the time in the queen’s court. This all ties in with the story of the Demon King and the amulet Han acquires, and it ends with some revelations that should make the rest of the series interesting, even if some of them were predictable.

The Demon King seemed like an introduction to the world and characters that are important to the series, especially with most of the major events happening close to the end. Even so, it’s an immensely entertaining book on its own despite a slow start. Cinda Williams Chima has created an all-around gripping fantasy story with strong main protagonists and a well-realized world. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens in future installments.

My Rating: 7.5/10

Where I got my reading copy: Review copy from a publicist.

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Hard Spell is the first book in a new series by Justin Gustainis, the Occult Crimes Unit Investigation series.  There is a second book in this urban fantasy series in progress, Evil Dark.

The supernaturals (or “supes” for short) were not a regular occurrence in the United States until after World War II. When the American soldiers came back from fighting overseas, many of them returned as vampires or werewolves and the supernatural started to become more widespread in America. As traveling by plane became more popular, many more of the supernatural moved to the US and their numbers continued to grow.  The supernatural were more prevalent in some places than others, and many of them gathered in Scranton, Pennsylvania, due to its ley lines. This keeps Stan Markowski busy at his job in the Occult and Supernatural Crimes Investigation Unit: he’s called in to take care of everything from goblins on meth robbing a liquor store to demon summoning rituals.

One night Markowski and his partner Karl Renfer are assigned to check out the scene of a murder. A wizard was gruesomely killed, but whoever did it raided his safe yet left a rather substantial amount of cash behind. Markowski wants to know what exactly the murderer was after since it obviously wasn’t money, especially since the dead man had obviously endured a lot of torture before giving in. He enlists Rachel, the department’s witch, to perform a necromancy to find out what happened from the victim himself, but this goes awry. This becomes the least of their problems as vampires are methodically murdered, and Markowski and Renfer learn more about the potential of the stolen object. Can they stop this ambitious vampire/wizard murderer from attaining his ultimate goal before it’s too late?

Hard Spell was not my cup of tea. This book and I had a rocky relationship from the very beginning since the jokes struck me as very cheesy and overdone, meaning I was rolling my eyes far more than I was laughing. It tried very hard to be funny and show how modern it was, and this just fell flat for me. If not for this, the handling of female characters, and some clumsy writing, I probably would have found it an unoriginal but vaguely entertaining book, especially because it did improve toward the end. Unfortunately, the later improvement wasn’t enough to make me want to pick up the next book and I didn’t find it particularly enjoyable to read.

This is another urban fantasy where werewolves, vampires, witches, wizards, goblins, and all kinds of magic lives among us in modern times (although the fact that AOL came up made me wonder just how modern it was). It’s also another one featuring a main character working for some sort of paranormal investigation unit dedicated to dealing with keeping order with all this magic around. It also has a rewritten history including details such as Martin Luther King having a dream including supernaturals and naturals living together peaceably – and perhaps being a closet supernatural himself since he was killed by a silver bullet. It seems like very standard urban fantasy with a few different historical details, but nothing about it seemed terribly unique to me.

The main aspect that sets it apart from other urban fantasy books I’ve read is the tone of the writing. Markowki’s narrative is very coarse with a very specific brand of humor. As a whole it’s also full of foul language, which one may or may not have a problem with. That doesn’t bother me personally from a moral viewpoint, but it did bother me just because it appeared to be going out of its way to include bad language. In general, it seemed to be trying much too hard to find outlandish expressions or “clever” phrases to include.  Here’s a couple of examples of what appeared to me as trying too hard so you can judge for yourself if you’ll have some of the same issues (language/sexual content warning ahead):

 

Scranton’s got a “live and let unlive” relationship with the supernatural, just like everyplace else. [pp. 1]

…I started into my eggs-over-greasy… [pp. 163]

She was looking at me as if I’d just suggested we have three-way sex with a goat some night. A really old, smelly goat. [pp. 55]

I heard Karl mutter under his breath, “Well, fuck me to Jesus with a strap-on dildo.” [pp. 46]

It’s littered with modern day references, which your mileage will also vary with.  Personally, I rolled my eyes about the adult video store where they came across Werewolves Gone Wild and The VILF Next Door (“VILF” of course stands for “Vampire I’d Like to Fang”). Even aside from that, I thought it spent too much time trying to drive home the point that this was modern. It included far more description than is necessary for things like IM chatting with a vampire and searching Google for information on a book called the Opus Mago. The Google search scene told me how many results there were, that many of them dealt with music or some penguin, and that he then put quotes around “Opus Mago” to get better results. It’s enough for me to know Markowski was searching for information on the book; I really don’t need to know the details of how he conducted his Google search. Similarly, there was a part where he checked his voicemail that included the entire part at the beginning about which number to press to perform certain actions. While it is very much a part of what Markowski is doing as a first person narrator, it still seems like clumsy writing to me – it’s enough to know what was said in the voicemail without knowing what number will delete a message. Also, the beginning is just one big infodump about how the supernatural got to America and why they are especially attracted to Scranton, Pennsylvania.

Furthermore, I was bothered by the treatment of female characters in the book. I’ve been going back and forth on whether or not this is justified since I really did get the impression that Markowski viewed these women with respect for their abilities and competence at their jobs. However, in spite of being told about their competence, the more prominent female characters do end up being damsels in distress – one ends up as a vessel inhabited by evil, one is kidnapped, and one is held hostage. As a somewhat standard crime noir tale, this book probably isn’t trying to buck any gender trends, but if you are looking for a novel with heroines that act like the match of the guys, I suspect you’ll be disappointed with this one. It’s implied that these women are strong, but it didn’t do much to back up that claim.

This didn’t bother me nearly as much as the way Markowski always seemed to comment on the female character’s body/attractiveness unless she was a relative. I suppose this is normal for a straight, single male, but the way it was done just seemed unnecessary, and like many things in this book, over the top. For instance, there’s a character in the office by the name of “Louise” who is called “Louise the Tease” behind her back because she wears tight clothing. Aside from that, she’s supposed to be a genius, but there’s far more focus on her style of dress, especially because we’re briefly told she’s intelligent without really being shown that she is. Markowski thinks of her as “Louise the Tease” instead of simply “Louise.” Another woman, Heidi, couldn’t be introduced without being privy to the fact that Markowski wonders “if her supe-proof vest had to be custom-made to accommodate those formidable breasts” (pp. 268).  This is probably just to seem in keeping with the cop character type and one who’s not that young, either – after all, Markowski thinks of  his partner in his early 30s as young and is old enough to have an adult daughter. Yet the number of times these types of comments were made got to be too much and it didn’t make me feel any better about the portrayal of women in this book.

This book is heavier on the urban fantasy/mystery aspect than characterization, although Markowski is given more depth through some revelations about his past. He’s not the sappy type, though, so some of the more touching moments are glossed over. It’s very much about the action – at least when it’s not focusing on the riveting Google search or voicemail scenes.

Hard Spell just wasn’t a book for someone with my taste. The story was somewhat entertaining on its own later in the book, although it was a somewhat generic urban fantasy/mystery combo. It’s not very character-oriented, plus it was dragged down further by lame jokes, objectified female characters, and just all around over-the-top expressions and descriptions.  They may seem like nitpicky little things separately, but there were certainly enough of them quite frequently that they added up, especially since aside from them I found this book mediocre at best. However, I just collected links to ratings on the other sites I always include at the top and I just noticed I seem to be the only person who didn’t like it, so perhaps you will.

My Rating: 2/10 (I was torn between a 2 and a 3, but I decided that any book that made me stop reading and rant at my husband as much as this one did should be a 2)

Where I got my reading copy: Review copy from the author.

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